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Report Rough Introduction 

This report is one of four parts that will conclude in BA3a and this part is for the Rough & Proposal parts of the essay. In exchange with my peers and tutors, i will develop and deepen my enquiry by engaging with a range of research sources using primary and secondary methods. 

The brief is to create a proposal that is a 1,000 word document that clearly plans the content and argument which will form the basis of my research report. Over the summer i will conduct research for BA3a. 

The report rough must be presented in a 10 minute, 10 slide PDF slide. The report must include:

  • Subject

  • Question/Inquiry

  • Explain subject, question or inquiry.

  • State two key texts

  • Explanation of key texts

  •  Explain intended use of referencing & research 

  • images 

My plan of action is to look at the 5 key texts and choose which one will be suitable for my chosen subject and question. My subjects will have to be related to one of the following; practices, cultural issues, interested subjects, historical issues, theories and past projects. 

Report Rough Ideas & Themes

I have looked at the 5 different key texts and the one that has shined out for me most is the text by John Berger: 'Ways Of Seeing' I find this piece of text quite complicated to read but very interesting in the sense that seeing is perceptive and can be seen differently in varied and complicated ways. Its not just seeing with eyes but with ideas, facts and opinions on issues and arguments of all varied themes. 

For my report i will make a list of subjects that i am interested in and see if i can narrow down certain subjects within these themes that i can expand on and research with cultural and historical issues in mind.

Themes/Subjects/Interests: 

  • Animals

  • Animal Welfare

  • Anthrozoology (Human/Animal Relationship)

  • Taxidermy

  • Wildlife

  • Conservation 

  • Mental Health

  • Mysterious encounters

  • Feral Children

  • Urban Legends

  • Folklore

  • Unexplored/unexplained sea Creatures (Marina Trench)

  • Importance Of Narrative Within Illustration

Urban Legends/Myth: Phantom Cats

I am really fascinated with a range of urban legends and mysterious that surround different cultures from all over the world. One of these themes is surrounded on the myth/urban legend of big cat sightings around the UK. This theme relates nicely to the piece of text i have chosen called 'Ways Of Seeing' which is all about different perceptions in many contexts.

 

Urban legends themselves are controversial, mysterious and  many perceptions and pnions on what is true and fake from different ways of seeing them. 

https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/2164661/big-cat-sightings-in-the-uk-where-have-wild-cats-been-spotted-and-what-are-the-theories/

Big Cat Sightings: Big cat sightings have been an recurring theme throughout the years especially between 2010 - 2017 with 560 been reported by police in the UK. It is estimated that 2,000 sightings have been seen of big cats around the English countryside but not many are logged into police records. 

Why are wild cats roaming the UK?  Following the Dangerous Wild Animals act set in place in 1976, it was illegal to keep untamed animals so many were set loose by private owners and zoos.

 

Many sightings today have been recorded all over the UK including more than 50 sightings orginating from the East Anglia area including Norfolk, Suffolk and Essex.  These big cats have been said to be a mixture of Lynx, Panther, cougers and leopards. 

Evidence: Many members of the public are the ones who report wild big cat sightingd around the UK. One local to where i live happened last year when a lady saw a large leopard like cat in her garden before it jumped over her 7ft fence. 

Other sightings have been in the countryside including the so called 'Beast Of Bodmin' who has been reported by many people. One recent report was by a man who said a large puma like cat jumped out of the bushes and ran away. The animal left paw prints in the clay. 

Research Of Wolves Introduction

Wolves 

Breeds

Gray Wolf

Eurasian Wolf

Arctic Wolf

Indian Wolf

Portrayed 

Evil

Hunters

Dangerous

Howl At Moon

Man Eaters

Below are a few question that i have already thought about just based on information that i already know about the wolf without research. I will continue to research to gather more information and see if i can expand on these themes and ideas. 

. Do Wolves Deserve Their Fearsome Reputation?

. Can Man and Wolf Live Together? (Shaun Ellis)

.What has objectification of the animal got to do with its welfare?

Folklore/Stories/Culture

Little Red Riding Hood

Warewolf

Fenrir (Norse Mythology)

Behaviour

Pack Animal

Highly Social

Hirerarchy

Work As A Team

Bad Reputation

Books/Films

The Last Wolf

The Sight

Planet Earth

White Fang

The Wolfman

I like this theme for my essay but i feel as though it wont be a subject that will keep my interest going through into third year because of lack of information it holds although it is a open and debated subject to go on. I will therefore look at themes that are more related to my working practice today but still with the theme of animals and nature. 

My new idea and theme for my essay that links to my working practice will be revolved around wolves. Wolves and the theme of wild animal welfare have always been something that i have been attached too personally and in my working practice so i feel that i can carry this report through into third year. 

Above i have made a spider diagram of ideas that first popped into my head when thinking about wolves and other themes that link them together. This is to help me narrow down the question and argument that i want to be at the forefront of my report essay and that can be talked about widely. I will research some areas that stand out for me to gain more insight and information that will go towards my essay. 

Endangered

Hunted

Shaun Ellis

Wild Dogs

Personal Exp

Polar Park

Captive Wolves

Native American

Why Look At Animals

I have chosen two key texts which will be my spring board to properly help me research and produce a question, enquiry or argument that will be the at the forefront to my proposal presentation and essay. 

The first key text is:

John Berger - Why Look At Animals? 

I chose this key text because i read it during my main project on rats and i feel that it is also appropriate to be my first chosen key text within this essay. The text itself was quite difficult to read due to how abstract the style of writing is but it is very interesting to read about a subject that is very broad and can be seen in many lights. 

My summary and understanding of the piece of writing is that it is a based on the evolution of our relationship between animals,  how they used to be seen as gods and today, been decreased to nothing but captive entertainment for us. 

 

Below i have listed some key points that i got from the writing when reading: 

  • Animals were first seen as gods/deities and were at the forefront of human language

  • Used and were seen as metaphors for language and storytelling

  • Muses for first human art 

  • were used as the zodiac signs

  • animalsprovide and offer comfort, unconditional affects even though they cant speak, we understand each other.  

  • we used animals to help us survive and respected them

  • Industrial revoulation & urbanisation spread and took away the use of animals from streets, farms and factories.

  • Extinction of animals sparked to create artificial spaces known as zoos. 

  • rise of pet animals began as a extension of human fashion and vanity. 

  • pets made animals stupid and rely on us.

  • Grew popularity of rare species in zoos.

  • anthropomorphic animals (toys/films/disney/media)

Some main key quotes to support these ideas: 

"The practice of keeping animals regardless of their usefulness, the keeping, exactly, of pets (in the 16th century the word usually referred to a lamb raised by hand) is a modern innovation, and, on the social scale on which it exists today, is unique. It is part of that universal but personal withdrawal into the private small family unit, decorated or furnished with mementoes from the outside world, which is such a distinguishing feature of consumer societies."

"The zoo to which people go to meet animals, to observe them, to see them, is, in fact, a monument to the impossibility of such encounters. Modern zoos are an epitaph to a relationship which was as old as man."

"Children in the industrialized world are surrounded by animal imagery: toys, cartoons, pictures, decorations of every sort. No other source of imagery can begin to compete with that of animals. The apparently spontaneous interest that children have in animals might lead one to suppose that this has always been the case. Certainly some of the earliest toys (when toys were unknown to the vast majority of the population) were animal. Equally, children’s games, all over the world, include real or pretended animals. Yet it was not until the 19th century that reproductions of animals became a regular part of the decor of middle class childhoods — and then, in this century, with the advent of vast display and selling systems like Disney’s — of all childhoods."

"A zoo is a place where as many species and varieties of animal as possible are collected in order that they can be seen, observed and studied. In prinicple, each cage is a frame around the animal inside it. Visitors visit the zoo to look at animals. They proceed from cage to cage, not unlike visiters in an art gallery who stop in front of one painting and then move onto he next or the one after next. Yet in the zoo the view is always wrong. Like an image out of focus. One is so accustomed to this that one scarcely notices any more: or rather, the apology habitually anticipates the disappointment, However if you look at these animals, even if the animal is up against the bars, less than a foot from you, you are looking at something that has been rendered absolutely marginal" 

Website Summary of Why Look At Animals: 

https://www.brainpickings.org/2014/04/01/why-look-at-animals-john-berger-about-looking/

From this piece of writing that i have chosen, i will look at particular themes within this writing and research subjects that relate to what i want to be at the forefront of my essay and proposal. I am not so sure how this piece of text could relate to my interest in wolves to be able to continue into a 5,000 word final essay so i may have to broaden the theme into animals as a whole. This will be all dependant on how my research on particular themes within this writing fit and weave together well. 

Below are themes i will research that will be relevant to the writing: 

  • Anthropomorphic Animals

  • Objectification of animals

  • Objectification of zoos 

  • animal welfare relating to objectification 

  • stuffed animals/toys

  • animals in the media

  • misrepresentation of animals

John Berger: Ways Of Seeing

My second piece of writing is based on another of John Bergers work called 'Ways of Seeing'. This was 1 out of 5 pieces of writing i could have chosen for the brief that goes into my report essay. 

This piece of writing is focused on the way that we see things effected by perception, knowledge and beliefs. For example, 1500 - 1900 visual art has been replaced by the modern photograph, changing its meaning. Woman and a man cultural presence has changed.

"One might simplify this by saying: men act and women appear. Men look at women. Women watch themselves being looked at. This determines not only most relations between men and women but also the relation of women to themselves. The surveyor of woman in herself is male: the surveyed female. Thus she turns herself into an object -- and most particularly an object of vision: a sight.”" 

"“To be naked is to be oneself. To be nude is to be seen naked by others and yet not recognised for oneself.” 

I believe that this piece of writing relates to my first chosen text because it states a argument and question about different opinions and perceptions of the objectification of animals and how our relationship with them has changed over time towards today. 

Posing A Question & Subject 

Since reading 'Why Look At Animals' by John Berger. i have dissected the piece of text and it has been at the forefront of my ideas for my essay. My working practice has always been focused on animal welfare and animal conservation so this article has been a good starting point for me to research and narrow down a subject that i want to go ahead with.

 

'Why look at animals' talks a lot about animal objectification and animal welfare so i believe it fits well into my working practice. The second piece of text 'Ways Of Seeing' is about perception and how it can be changed and seen. Below are some questions that i have posed to myself and experimented with to see what road of animal welfare i would look to go down that relates to the two key texts.  

  • The importance of animal objectification

  • why and how do we objectify animals?

  • Has the objectification of animals been a good outcome for our society?

  • Objectification of the wolf

  • How have animals been represented? 

  • Why have animals been objectified and how can we represent them more accurately? 

Animal objectification has been something that i have always thought, both in a negative and positive way. The negative being that they can be seen as nothing but objects and the positive being that we can objectify them to raise awareness for endangered species and education of them. I want my question to pose the more negative side to the objectification of animals because they are seen a lot in society as tools and objects that are not important for us and we take them for granted. 

My final and refined question i will pose for this essay will be:

 - Why have animals been objectified how can we represent them more accurately? 

Proposal Presentation Statement Of Intent 

Below is the statement for my presentation proposal. I have filled out the whole statement on this blog is that it is easy for me to clarify my intentions and ideas. The presentation itself will incoude these different ideas bur i will be showing it in a 10 slide PDF format. 

Subject: 

Objectification of animals today

Question: 

Why have animals been objectified and how can we represent them more accurately? 

Key Texts: 

John Berger - Why Look At Animals?

John Berger - Ways Of Seeing

Explanation Of Subject:

Objectification consists of an animal that has been used as a tool or object. It has been taken ownership and silenced by denial of emotion, soul and value. Animal welfare has always been linked to my working practice because of my love of animals and nature. Naturally animals, conservation and welfare are at the forefront of my work as an illustrator. 

Explanation Of Key Texts: 

Why Look At Animals: My summary of this piece of writing is that it is based on the evolution of our relationship between animals, how they were seen as gods, and today been decreased to nothing but captive,

objectified entertainment for us. I have chosen this as a key text for my essay and to pose my question on because i am a firm believer in animal welfare and rights for animals. 

Ways Of Seeing: This piece of text is focused on the way we perceive things affected buy knowledge, perception and beliefs. I have chosen this to be my second piece of text because it relates well to the first piece of text about animal welfare and the different perceptions people have on it and how controversial it is. 

Explanation Of Referencing + Researching: 

My research so far has consisted of finding and posing a question based on the two key texts that i have chosen to be the springboard of my essay question and theme. My research will continue to look into how animals are objectified in other ways such as in labs, zoos and circuses and why they are now objectified today. This could include how they are misrepresented in the media and how our society has formed them into objects rather than beings on the same level as us. 

I will research also into how animals are objectified in positive and negative ways in art. Since the beginning of human language, animals have been at the forefront of language and storytelling by cave paintings and zodiac signs. 

Other extended researching i will do is: 

  • Animal Game Parks

  • Anthropomorphic animals (Disney)

  • Welfare Of Animals In Zoos

  • Animals as pets

  • Exotic Pets

  • how animals are represented in the creative industry. 

I will reference my two key texts with citations from the written articles that support my question and theme:

"if you look at these animals, even if the animal is up against the bars, less than a foot from you, you are looking at something that has been rendered absolutely marginal" - John Berger - Why Look At Animals

“To be naked is to be oneself. To be nude is to be seen naked by others and yet not recognised for oneself.”  - John Berger - Ways Of Seeing.

One of the first quotes i have come across on the internet a couple years ago is:

 

"The idea that some lives matter less is the root of all that is wrong with the world" - Paul Farmer 

Images: 

The images i have chosen are starting images that correlate to my research and theme of this essay and that i will include in the presentation. 

This first one is a image that relates really well to the quoted text. Ever since i saw this on my social media feed a couple years ago, it has always stuck with me when i think about animals that are in zoos, especially facilities which do not accommodate appropriately for them. 

The photo for instance is taken of a bear sadly looking up, that is clearly in not good condition, being watched by children at the top of the enclosure. This photo cleary represents all that is wrong with humanities mind set on animals, and the text that is added really justifies that. 

These illustrations left and right are by artist, Ryan Berkley. This artist has a series of illustrations that are of animals that are somewhat anthropomorphised in human clothing. I personally believe that humanizing animals in this way can be a good thing because it brings awareness to different creatures and the humanising of them can sometimes have a good outcome and meaning that we should not think of ourselves as higher than other animals, as we also are animals ourselves. 

Although, stereotyping them into different categories can be demeaning and not accurate to that species. For example, the illustration on the left is of a Great White Shark. These sharks are one of the most feared creatures because of the bad press they have had on attacking and killing people.The shark in this piece is wearing a smart suit which can relate to governmental bodies who are seen a greedy and full of power, much like in the media of the shark.  

This photograph is a double exposure photograph of a polar bear and the Northern Lights by Norwegian artist, Andreas Lie. This sort of piece of artwork, doesn't demean the animal from the bad press and stereotypes it has but rather the showcasing animal in its wild, natural habitat. The artist said himself that he wants to capture the 'Spirit' of these animals and their integral habitat. 

Proposal Presentation  

Above is the PDF presentation that i made  for the presentation proposal for my essay. I was around a group of other peers that have similer interests with me and two lecturers to provide advice and guidance for what i could do. T took the template from the statement information that i have given on my blog and put it into my presentation. 

I feel i explained my idea and argument well and got some valuable feedback and ideas that i could research further into to expand my argument and question. 

This included: 

  • Researching Taxidermy animals - Dressed up Animals

  • Level Of Privacy For Zoo/tourist animals 

  • Krysten Newby Illustrator Research (Perished Pets)

  • legalisation of Circus animals 

  • Stereotypes of animals 

  • Animal antagonists 

  • Animals in different cultures objectification 

  • How animals representations have changed 

  • Perceptional parts 

With my gathered ideas come together, my next step is to write up my 1,000 word proposal essay with these themes and ideas in mind to make my essay work. 

1,000 Word Essay Proposal

Attached in the PDF file is my 1,000 essay proposal. I Enjoyed writing up this essay as it is themed around a subject that is close to my heart. I feel that i have made appropriate suggestions and themes on what i will extend my research on over the summer. I wanted to choose a subject that also relates to my working practice and i feel this idea is at the forefront of my practice. 

Norwich University Of The Arts

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